Zoey's just gotten home from the hospital in this snippet and she's seeing her room - and her body - for the first time since the accident that took away her memory.
This was really interesting to me..I find amnesia fascinating, ever since a college friend experienced it after falling off a chair in her dorm room. So bizarre how the mind works.
very interesting. I like how she reflects on changes and I'm intrigued as to when the changes are from.
ReplyDeleteGreat tease! You handle a bizarre situation really well! :D
ReplyDeleteThat was definitely touching. I like your mc's voice.
ReplyDeleteI love the little things she's looking through, like bra size (also, I love her slingshotting it).
ReplyDeleteI love her voice!
But I needed to search my body first, to see if there were any clues there.
ReplyDeleteThis was very powerful and moving. Great job, Sam!
really well done. love the MC's voice and am ready to see what happens next!
ReplyDeleteThis was really interesting to me..I find amnesia fascinating, ever since a college friend experienced it after falling off a chair in her dorm room. So bizarre how the mind works.
ReplyDeleteNice scene, and I'd definitely read on! :)