You'd think that I would've written more, but I find when I get free time, I don't exactly use it to write. I've cleared my workspace and made it a little stress-free, but I don't know if that'll help. Hopefully! Anyways, this week's teaser from THE UNLIKELIHOOD OF NOSTALGIA is short, just about Zoey's first day back at school:
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I'm wondering why and how she's lost her mind. I really liked this line (thought it was funny): "In every class, the teacher went over the Code of Conduct, which basically told us not to dress weird or kill each other, and then they handed out papers for us to fill out." I really hated that about school.
ReplyDeleteI want to find out more about her situation.
Remilda: She got hit by a car (a hit and run, actually) and lost the memory of the last four years of her life. :)
ReplyDeleteWow. That sucks. (Actually, 'sucks,' I'm sure, doesn't quite cover it.) Thanks for explaining. :)
ReplyDeleteHah, I LOVE your description of the cafeteria. How awesome. Not so much for her memory loss. That's gotta be rough :( Good job!
ReplyDeleteI'm wondering how she lost her memory. Love the voice! <3
ReplyDeleteWhat a great scene! It certainly captures the boredom quite well. :)
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